SCRIPT NOTES
Struggling to take your script to the next level?
Writing can feel like a solitary pursuit, but it doesn't have to be.
If you’re stuck, unsure what’s missing, or feel that your script isn’t reaching its full potential, I can help you identify exactly where it falls short. And how to fix it.
Just contact me, grab a cappuccino, and while you take a break, I’ll dive into your script and provide detailed, constructive feedback to help bring out its full potential.
I’m an award-winning screenwriter and story consultant with an M.A. in Screenwriting. My work has been recognized with a Student Academy Award®, a BAFTA Student Awards nomination, and the Audience Award at the Max Ophüls Prize, and has screened at over 1,000 festivals worldwide.
I’ve also served as a jury member at international film festivals, sharpening my sense for what makes stories stand out.
Here's what I can offer:
Detailed, constructive notes (among the most thorough you’ll find)
At least eight pages of feedback, often significantly more
A deep dive into plot, character, pacing, structure, dialogue, and more
Honest, balanced analysis that highlights strengths and areas for improvement
Clear, actionable suggestions you can apply immediately
A collaborative, supportive approach that respects your vision
Optional ongoing support as a coach or long-term sparring partner