“David went ABOVE AND BEYOND with his coverage. I was hesitant at first because of the 10-day turnaround, but he delivered page-for-page notes that not only justified the turnaround time, but his level of insight and detailed notes demonstrates that he’s not just skimming and summarizing. Hands down, the best coverage I’ve ever received!”
— Juddy Hollon
“David L is nothing short of a STAR in scriptwriting! His attention to detail and professionalism in crafting the narrative was impressive, while his persuasiveness added a captivating touch. Working with him was a delight due to his quick responsiveness and excellent cooperation. His insights were exceptional, and I eagerly look forward to future collaborations. 👍”
— Noelene Turton
“David offers something truly rare—feedback that feels like it comes from someone who genuinely cares about your work. He’s incredibly thorough, and his unique method of walking through the script with a stream-of-consciousness approach gives you a real-time sense of how a reader is experiencing each page. It’s honest, insightful, and deeply considerate. I highly recommend his services to any writer looking for meaningful, actionable feedback. 🎬👏”
— Vinicius Bittencourt
“I’ve worked with David, over a few passes, on this script enough to definitely say that he is a true artist and professional. He has understated his ability to address deficiencies and give thoughtful, proactive and actionable notes. I couldn’t be more pleased with every interaction. ”
— Chad Gregory
“This was a great experience and I hope to work with this editor again. The feedback was thoughtful and thorough. Together with an overview of the script, David also provided insightful detail that will be beneficial to th script and easy to implement.”
— Shaun Baines
“Thoughtful notes. Will help as I evolve the script through future drafts. Clear communication. A true pro! Thank you for another excellent experience.”
— Stephen Hoover
“David did an excellent job, I found that the issues he had with it echoed a lot of my own thoughts on the piece, he however added a layer of clarity on exactly what it was that I could do to fine tune the piece into something truly great that I had been struggling to articulate myself. He wasn’t afraid to really get in there and point out little details that you may have just missed, like capitalizing a name the first time you introduced a character. He also provided great feedback on the many strengths of the piece, and gave it a blind read that really helped me feel out where someone might fall reading it for the first time.”
— Clovis Pointer
“Blown away by David’s attention to detail and the care with which he crafted his notes! There are so many gems in this coverage that will make the next draft stronger. He also provided extra pages of notes, which he did not have to do. This extra effort just shows his immense dedication to the craft. Will definitely seek out his services in the future!”
— Peyton Tenison
“David went above and beyond in reviewing my script. He didn’t just read it once—he read and re-read, delivering exceptionally detailed notes that helped me clearly see how to approach my next draft. He gave me far more insight than I expected, including unique tips on how to tweak scenes and fresh directions for the story. What I appreciated most is that while I expected only criticism, David balanced his feedback by highlighting what worked—moments that made him laugh, think, or simply enjoy the story. That positive reinforcement left me feeling not just challenged, but excited and hopeful about my rewrite. David’s combination of depth, honesty, and encouragement makes him an outstanding script consultant. I can’t recommend him enough, and I’ll definitely be coming back as a repeat customer. Thanks, David! ”
— Matt Hill
“Fantastic work! This seller went above and beyond what I was expecting and I’m so grateful that he did. This will help the next (and hopefully final draft...fingers crossed) take monumental leaps to be great. Will use again.”
— Christopher Lang
“Wow! David went above and beyond in giving me actionable and specific feedback that will positively impact my screenplay. The notes are professional - critical but supportive. I will definitely be a return customer. I cannot recommend David highly enough. THANK YOU!”
— Wendy Bednarz
“Excellent notes from a thoughtful reader. Deep dive on an advanced draft with both big picture and page notes. Always useful. Thank you!”
— Stephen Hoover
“Very happy with David’s quick and professional manner and first class feedback. Detailed and constructive notes, useful suggestions and above all: a positive tone. If you’re looking for a fresh set of eyes from an experienced script editor before you start your next draft, I highly recommend him.”
— Cosmo Fletcher
“Sharing unfinished work is uncomfortable but david made it feel like a productive and rewarding process. lotta care in his notes and was surprised by the page count of the coverage. he’s gonna regret it but ill be back for more feedback on future stuff.”
— Tayes T.
“David’s feedback was detailed and extensive. It was evident that he had analysed my screenplay extensively before writing his feedback. It is clear from his notes that he knows what makes a script great whatever the genre is. A++ seller. Would recommend.”
— Jack Packshaw
“David provided an insane amount of thorough and actionable notes. So much so that it’s going to take me some time to wade through everything. It’s pretty clear that he put time and effort into this. He has a deep understanding of storytelling and was able to provide ideas that will help me fill in some missing pieces on my next draft. I highly recommend and would use his service again.”
— Travis Taylor
“Thoughtful notes. An actionable path forward. Nice mix of story and character notes. Nice mix of overall story notes with specific page notes. Great value. Thanks!”
— Stephen Hoover
“Absolutely knocked it out of the park! David inspires with his advice. Grateful to have found him, will be using over and over.”
— Paulie Redding
“Amazing coverage. Spot-on suggestions for improvement.”
— Brook Simmons
“David was a pleasure to work with. Communication was quick and effective. He delivered his feedback well within the timeframe. The quality of work was exceptional!”
— Mike Edlefsen
“I’m extremely pleased with his work. He grasped the essence of my script and understood exactly what I was trying to express. His insightful feedback and thoughtful suggestions helped me elevate the script and clarify my intentions. I truly appreciated his attention to detail and the care he put into it.”
— Bárbara N. Giménez
“David has been unbelievably helpful. For any writers stuck in their head or seeking feedback, David is your guy. He really went above and beyond and has given me lots of hope!”
— Erin Major
“David went above and beyond on his notes and attention to details. You can tell right away that he really cares about your project and wants to understand your vision to help you as the writer make it the best possible script it can be. I highly, highly recommend.”
— Easton Gunnoe
“David was an incredibly attentive reader and provided thorough and absolutely fair criticisms of my screenplay that have been super helpful as I revise. He has a real eye for detail, and is great at centering his focus squarely on what’s in front of him. He’s dedicated to meeting the work where it is and assessing it for what it is, rather than what he feels it should be, which is so rare and so appreciated!”
— Armando Carlo-Gonzalez
“David was wonderful and the notes were very helpful/constructive, I will definitely be using his service again!”
— Riley Donigan
“‘Above and beyond’ is an understatement.... David went through my screenplay with a fine tooth comb, just as if the work was his own. He missed nothing: from punctuation to AMAZING ideas for structure, story and character development (even suggesting movies to watch for ideas!) His feedback was a true deep dive, utterly professional and VVVV generous with the amount of pages he sent! Above and beyond. I will 100% be using him again.”
— Jeff Chagrin
“David is an amazing writer, and he really opened my eyes to the things that work and don’t work in my script. He’s very professional with his feedback and went above and beyond with the amount of notes he gave me. I really recommend his services. I will definitely use his services again!”
— Andrew Quintero
“Outstanding experience! Working with David was an absolute pleasure. His feedback on our short film script was not only incredibly thorough and insightful, but also delivered with care, clarity, and deep understanding of story structure, tone, and satire. You can feel his experience in every sentence – his comments sparked new ideas, highlighted key opportunities for improvement, and affirmed the strengths of our concept. On top of that, the communication was smooth, respectful, and encouraging throughout. David is the kind of expert you hope to find – professional, sharp, generous with his knowledge, and genuinely passionate about storytelling. Highly recommended, and we’ll definitely be working with him again.”
— Lenny Poric
“Brilliant insights into my script and definitely things that are actionable to take forward into the next draft to make it better, no end. This fiverr went above and beyond with the work that they provided me with. Will be reordering again for sure. ”
— Christopher Ian Lang
“My second time working with David and I will continue you do so. He fully grasped what I was aiming for and was able to provide clear and actionable notes that will help with the next draft. I will certainly continue to make him a goto in the future.”
— Travis Taylor
“David’s notes are thorough, precise and wonderfully structured. I greatly appreciated his attention to detail and actual care for my project!”
— Jalen Neal
“Great and comprehensive script notes. David was very professional and critical while also great at highlighting strengths/potential within my script. Was a pleasure working with him and will definitely be working with him in the future.”
— Nathaniel Monical
“A++ Thank you! Great helpful notes!”
— Alex Bernstein
“I’ve had another wonderful experience working with David! His thoughts are well-organized, considerate, and honest. Communication is quick and clear. He provides feedback that is relevant and insightful, and is willing to give his own suggestions as a collaborative partner. Great experience!”
— Mike Edlefsen
“David was very thorough and eloquent with his feedback. He took the time to read my script multiple times, and I appreciated every piece of feedback! This made me 10x confident going into the production and adaptation of my screenplay.”
— Gabe Samoy
“David did more work than I had even expected of him. He went above and beyond with my script and gave me very tangible ideas that will inspire my rewrite. I hope to work with him again in the future!”
— Jacob Anthony Cain
“Amazing notes, will help me in my next draft immensely. Thanks David!”
— Nick Stewart
“The whole process when smooth and I got great results. Thanks David”
— Lila Bayet
“David went above and beyond with his coverage of my script. He helped expose flaws and offered suggestions to help strengthen my work while maintaining a very professional and constructive approach. His logline and summary were very fitting, and he clearly spent the proper amount of time to read and digest the script. I 100% recommend and will likely do business with again.”
— Nathaniel Demuth
“Fantastic work! His coverage really helped bring clarity to the issues of our script we’re wrangling with but also finding blind spots I missed.”
— Lance Revoir
“David absolutely gave his all on giving me notes and I will definitely be implementing them I look forward to working with him again ”
— Nikolas Tolmachoff
“David is a true professional. His clear concise commentary demonstrate his command of creativity and craft. This is his second look at a script I’m getting ready for festival season. It has gotten infinitely better with his ideas and suggestions. I’m excited about being able to work with him in the future. ”
— Chad Gregory
“David was exceptional. He read everything thoroughly and understood all the subtleties I was aiming for. His analysis and feedback were top-notch. I genuinely enjoyed reading his responses, he gave me several new ideas on what I could add and also helped fix issues with grammar and formatting. Five stars for David! I loved working with him and would highly recommend him to anyone who needs help with their work.”